Tuesday 18 August 2009

Sometimes it just feels right

Generally when I plan to write stories, I write the plots out in Narrative form. That is I tell a summary of the story from start to finish, without regard to chapters.

Consequently, when I actually start writing, there is a lot of "filler" to write. Not random stuff that has no relevance, but expanding of the narrative plot.

For example the narrative plot might read "Hermione talks to Harry about the night before, then they go down to breakfast".

Now I could write "Hermione sat down to Harry and asked him about the night before. After a brief discussion, they went down to breakfast together", but that's DULL! Really, really boring.

So instead I start writing in the bits that are missing. So you get this...

Hermione sat down on the sofa, and looked across at Harry.

"How's it going?" She asked. He shrugged "Did you have a good time last night?"

"Well - I had an odd dream about two otters and a sea-lion, but aside from that it was mostly okay" He grinned as she frowned at him.

"You know what I mean Jim - how did it go with Flitwick?"

"Pretty much okay"......

And so on. Most of what I write (as filler) is made up on the spot, without giving it much thought before hand.

Which is where I come to the title of the post - I have just finished a scene in "Sidious" where Harry and Luna are discussing what's going to happen on Back To School day in Diagon Alley. It wasn't one I planned out before (very occasionally I will write complete plans of scenes, but that is usually reserved for fights and large scale battles, because you would not believe how easy it is to kill someone and then having them fighting two scenes later) and I just started writing.

In most cases like this, I get about three or four paragraphs in, and it just clicks - I know how to end it, and then I just steer the story in that direction. And when I reach the end, I know I have because it feels right - it feels like that should be the end.

The thing is - I can't explain WHY it feels right. It just does. The closest analogy I can think of is Colin Mathews talking about when to sell and when not to in Press Gang - you just get this feeling that this is the moment, and everything has fallen in to place.

Does anyone else get like this? Or is it just me?

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